Sound of Solace
Me in “ME”
I don’t see much of me in me
When I see more of me in me.
I don’t see the feel of touch of me in me
When I feel more of me in me.
Life has been dark blur of blur in me of me,
Lights have high magnitude of beam to beams.
Clear of clarity in life stops vision of me
as me,
But more blur in blur I feel to see me in me.
I walk to cart of life in life on wheels,
Where I drive see no zeal to see a feel.
I enjoy the most crazy of enjoy to heal,
But more scratches screech the speed what I
live in.
I search the worth of abundance in me as me.
Where I feel hauls of emptiness in me as me.
I haul loud smile in cry from me as me
But I see lots buy my cry, not to dry for me
in me.
Do I have missed a piece of peace in me as me?
But I find peace is a piece and piece left in
me as me.
I stood by mirror to mirror of me in me,
But found my image to be more of mirage in me
as me.
I took myself away from loud and cloud from
me as me,
Then I was able to see me in me faded in blue
of sea.
I sat on rock on rocks to talk stars for me
in me,
I found them singing tune of love in silence
for me in me.
I saw blaze of mountain spirit in me as me,
But dark silent was truth to find in light me
in me.
The day light blurs the fear but near the
fear in me as me,
The darkest of edge night clear my fear of me
as me.
I dual more of challenges to deal me in me
The night when I talked silence of me in me.
The haul of screech lead scratches in me as
me.
The voice of night took me at height as me in
me.
The more I searched abundance of silence in
me as me,
I felt all alone in crump of silence me as
me.
I learned to talk and walked in dark me in
me,
Stars started smiling in dark of dark for me
in me.
I saw much of me as me,
When I saw in dark me in me.
I felt touch of thee for me in me,
When I felt thy more for me in me.
I don’t see much of me in me
When I see more of me in me.
I don’t see the feel of touch of me in me
When I feel more of me in me.
Inked by: d’pen
"I don’t see much of me in me
ReplyDeleteWhen I see more of me in me."
Interesting sonnet.
Good one
ReplyDeleteExcellent, very interesting!
ReplyDeleteBest one by far!! After every stanza, I was losing the grip being lost in it. Mirage, on rocks, screech quotes were Mesmerizing! I kept me clinged to the end, read it over and over.
ReplyDeleteNicely inked, I have read it over and over again to go deep inside of 'me'
ReplyDeleteThank you Jaidhirwani ji,pravin kaka and Mayur sir for kind words....thank you anonymous from distand land-Ms.Ally Wang and Kuntal madam....thank you and appreciated fir kind words...hope i keep yo all entertain in same way.dipen
ReplyDeleteWonderful, as usual, difficult to understand in one go but once u get it it touches to your heart ❤️
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments
Deletewow... nice
ReplyDeleteFabulous ❤️I have read over & over again ☺️
ReplyDeleteBeautiful warding I keep reading each line twice to understand me in me.
ReplyDeleteAppreciate your gesture
DeleteWow
ReplyDeleteLovely Deepen, very philosophical. And yes need to read it multiple times ... as I got lost in me and me . ❤️ it keep the 🔥in you .
ReplyDeleteAs a rule .. man is always a walking contradiction partly truth and partly fiction.. you weaved into the words.. of wisdom beyond logic.. yes.. but ultimately shadow is nothing but negative existence.. truth is nothing but the negative lie.. and me is nothing but negative abundance.. vastness.. fullness.. is that reality..? or you can say real finction.. let me / myself get fulfilled.. and what remains is ME..
ReplyDeletemuch of me as me,
ReplyDeleteWhen I saw in dark me in me.
I felt touch of thee for me in me,
When I felt thy more for me in me.
I don’t see much of me in me
When I see more of me in me.
I don’t see the feel of touch of me in me
When I feel more of me in me.
When you feel the touch of thee in you, you intermingle with thee and become infinity
Waah
ReplyDeleteLONELYSS ......In search of ....
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